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This doesn’t look like Akash designed it.

One line of feedback pushed Panorama magazine from a functional digital zine into a much more authored editorial experience.

Observation 1 min read

The first version of Panorama worked.

It was a multi-page digital zine inside the Cityflo app. Stories had their own screens, there was an Explore page, and structurally it behaved like a fairly conventional content product.

Then our founder told my manager:

“This doesn’t look like Akash has designed it.”

And I loved hearing that.

Not because the first version was bad, but because he knew what I could do well enough to notice when I hadn’t pushed it far enough.

So I went back to it.

Instead of simply making the existing version look better, I rethought the experience itself.

Panorama lives inside the Cityflo app, inside a WebView, on a phone. The multi-page structure meant opening stories, navigating back, and repeatedly moving between screens.

That made sense as an app.

It didn’t feel right for a magazine.

So Panorama became one continuous editorial experience.

The cover flows into an index. Stories run one after another. Longer pieces expand in place instead of opening another page.

Visually, I pushed it toward something much more editorial too.

Large typography. A controlled grid. Deliberate whitespace. Strong compositions. And moments where the grid breaks just enough to give individual stories their own rhythm.

The first version worked.

I’m glad that wasn’t enough.

Check out the Magazine on the cityflo app